I picked this up as a Kindle freebie and found it to be a cute story. At only 58 pages, there wasn't much room for character or plot development, which somewhat hindered the story for me. Some characters were thrust into the story with little or no introduction (the cop "investigating" for instance - did she work for the local police department? Was she a cop from somewhere else on vacation there? What? I have no idea.) and the epilogue was a little forced. Yeah, it tied up the loose ends, but it felt tacked on to the end, rather than a continuance of the story.
Overall, not a bad little book and a good start, but still needs a little work.
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