The plot was ok but there were some slow parts. My main problems with this were the characters and the dialogue. I didn't really feel like any of the characters were fully developed and the dialogue never really rang true to me. Some of the phrases and wording just didn't flow or feel like how real people would say things. There were also quite a few formatting and editing problems. I generally don't detract from a rating for these things for self-published authors but I know some people have a huge problem with this so I mention it.
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6 September, 2014:
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