Reviewed by phyllish on
My rating is 3.5 stars
I liked the premise of the story and the mystery behind Thad's sudden jilting of May when he married her sister.
Poor May had always felt inferior to her sister. It didn't help that Thad's mother treated her as if she was lazy and incompetent! Yet May had a kind heart and a deep love for her niece, Leah. May's solution to the financial problems they were experiencing was quite clever and it was fun to read about her industry.
Thad was a little dense concerning women and made some big mistakes and yet I liked him anyway. He was a hard worker, did his best to provide for his family and tried to show May kindness and to win her heart back.
As a dairy farmer, Thad was involved with a local association. It was quite interesting to read about the problems they faced and the discussions they had related to organic labeling and supply and demand.
Despite the things I liked, I didn't really understand why May wouldn't forgive Thad or why Thad felt that she would be more devastated to know the reason he married April. Some of their interactions with one another seemed immature.
Some of the dialog was stilted or awkward. I would have liked the narrative to be more developed. It felt like there were a bunch of vignettes shared with just a little bit of detail and then it would move on. It is possible this was due to the formatting of the advance reader copy I had. Often, these are not formatted well and this one had no indicators between sections within the chapters.
There were several places in the story where something would happen or be said and then the author would include "as was the custom with the Amish" or something similar. That was unnecessary and awkward – of course it was an Amish thing – this is an Amish story.
There was also a part where Thad was realizing he needed to be patient and then thought about how "the gut book said" "patience is a virtue". And this bugged me, because that isn't in the Bible! (I looked it up and the origin of this adage is probably from the 1300s.)
There were a number of plot elements here that highlighted customs of the Amish and items in the Ordnung that really had me disliking the Amish rules and things they allow. This isn't the first Amish story I've read – it is just the way things were presented here really bothered me. One of which was the insinuation that it is expected of the women to gossip. And another thing that I won't mention because it would be a spoiler. I'll just say that the lack of showing grace in certain circumstances had me fuming a little, especially because of the result.
I realize that some of the things I didn't care for are merely personal preference. Keeping those in mind, many who enjoy Amish fiction may enjoy this story.
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- 6 January, 2020: Reviewed