Hidden Enemies (Empire of Bones Saga, #9)

by Terry Mixon

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I have to say that I love the universe and story line that Terry has created with these books. I would give the story a 5-star rating.
However, every time I read them; I cringe at the dialogue it reminds me of watching Baby Looney Tunes.
Maybe I’m writing this because I just read Renegades by Craig Alanson and it has fantastic dialogue, maybe that’s why I found it hard to get thru this book.
Somehow, I keep buying and reading them. Please Terry Please work on your dialogue, I know Kelsey is a spoiled princess, but she sounds like a little kid with her dialogue and stupid statements.