Reviewed by stacey_is_sassy on
Not too shabby
This was a free book that I decided to read and hope for the best. Some of the freebies have been a bit hit and miss. This book was pretty good.
The good stuff... the hero was an Alpha who had no problems admitting his attraction. He was a smooth talker who knew how to be sexy but sweet.
The heroine wasn't too bad, but I did find her a little immature. The plot moves along with mystery thrown in and friendships formed.
The bad stuff...like I said, I found the heroine immature.
The big baddie though was I think the book needed better editing. It needed to be more consistent with contractions. They were used sometimes, then at other times it was written like the characters were talking like English was their second language. It's distracting.
Overall this was a good story with a nice romance. I will definitely be reading more from this author.
Reading updates
- Started reading
- 29 March, 2014: Finished reading
- 29 March, 2014: Reviewed