Toads and Diamonds

by Heather Tomlinson

[Briana @ Pages Unbound]

Toads and Diamonds sets itself apart as a retelling of a fairytale not often chosen for the honor; “Cinderella,” “The Twelve Dancing Princesses,” and “Sleeping Beauty” are far more common. It also has a unique setting, drawing on the culture and religion of India instead of a western European country. For both decisions, Tomlinson deserves credit for her willingness to branch out and add something new to a genre where the books have many opportunities to sound the same. Toads and Diamonds is a refreshing and enchanting read that brings its audience to an exotic location where it seems obvious that magic can happen.

Tomlinson also reimagined the basic plotline of the tale, making both sisters “good.” This was a little unclear at first, as Tana repeatedly put herself down and observed that Diribani was a much better person, making it difficult to decide whether this is only Tana’s opinion or if it is something the narrator wanted the readers to believe. It is definitely only her opinion. Both Diribani and Tana are brave protagonists with good hearts, and it is fun to watch their adventures together as sisters and then alone when they are separated. The chapters are divided to alternate telling the story from each of their perspectives, and although the transitions are sometimes jarring, the plotlines are equally engaging.

Although this is a middle grade book, the romance part of these plots was disappointing. Both girls (who are around fifteen-years-old) had boys in whom they were interested, but the boys did not exhibit much attention in return. Admittedly, Tana had cobras leaping from her mouth, which is not very romantic. There is an explanation offered as to why Diribani’s love interest cannot too openly notice her, but it is somewhat of a stretch and its only obvious purpose seems to be to avoid overt romance in a children’s book. Ultimately, it is just unsatisfying that the two daydream so much and get little in return. Even the conclusions of these relationships is also left mostly open to the readers’ imaginations.

Other elements of the stories require, more than imagination, a leap of faith. Tana’s tale has some thrilling moments that are ultimately unbelievable. To avoid spoilers, I can only say that she ends up being pursued because of her gift, but the motivation given for this and subsequent actions does not really make sense. The deeds are just so extreme that they seem unrealistic. Yes, fairytales require some suspension of disbelief, but readers still expect characters to act in a logical manner.

Toads and Diamonds is charming and has some beautifully written passages. Two loyal sisters as protagonists is also very appealing. Overall, however, there is just too much missing to allow it to rise to the top of my list of favorite fairy tale retellings.

This review was also posted at Pages Unbound Book Reviews.