Reviewed by ladygrey on
The prose was intended to be flowery and interesting. Maybe it was my mood the day I read it, but it didn't strike me as being as wonderful as it hoped to be. Sometimes it worked and sometimes it felt like it was trying too hard. A lot of times it explained things vaguely and other times it repeated information I didn't need explained again. The pacing also was off. The plot seems to disappear in the middle of the book while they're falling in love (spoiler!) and then come sputtering back while the romance hits the sidelines. I'd have liked to see both more evenly integrated with one another.
But it's easy to pick up the flaws in a book and make it seem worse than it was, because it wasn't awful. It kept me reading through 463 pages - there was curiosity and the progression of the relationships and the characters that nicely filled a few hours on a Sunday.
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- 23 November, 2014: Finished reading
- 23 November, 2014: Reviewed