Reviewed by kimbacaffeinate on
With the Cooke brother's away, Allie is watching her nephew and Jay is helping the one night she can't do it. When an accident looks suspect, Allie spends time with Jay as they investigate. I really liked Jay. He has baggage and is slightly older. With Allie I wavered. There are aspects of her personality I loved, and at other moments I grew impatient with her, particularly with her indecisiveness.
The suspense thread was an intense one and revolved around Allie and her job. While we knew the players, it was exciting seeing it all come together as Ryan shared intense action scenes. Ryan did her research and this story could have pulled from today's headlines. I also like that a common issue in treatments was addressed. I am hoping the finish copy has some 800 #'s for folks who need it.
My issue with the story was the filler. There is a huge overlap of events that occurred in True to You and King's case. While it offered a different perspective, I found myself pulled from the current plot and skimming through. Then we have Jay's Mom, who lives in the guest house on Jay's property. Oh my! This thread felt unnecessary. Sure we gained insight into Jay's childhood but her placement within the timeline left me cold. I enjoyed the nephew, and it helped connect Alina and Jay after the weddings, but for me it interfered with the slow-build and relationship building that would have kept this from insta-love. I have said before; I don't mind insta-love and accept it as part of this genre, but I still need the feels. Ryan is awesome and her stories are intense, but this fell short for me.
Favorite moments: The Cooke brother's learning about the relationship and the awesome view of the stars from Jay's backyard. This review was originally posted at Caffeinated Reviewer
Reading updates
- Started reading
- 22 July, 2018: Finished reading
- 22 July, 2018: Reviewed