Everything That Makes You

by Moriah McStay

[Ashley]

This was a pretty good book but I feel like it was lacking direction. After the initial "this story is cool" feeling wore off, I found myself constantly wondering where the story was headed. I just couldn't see a clear direction/purpose/overarching plot. I felt like I was just aimlessly wandering around in these peoples' lives without a reason.

It was still a good read and the two different versions of Fiona's life felt very Pivot Point-esque. I liked seeing how some parts overlapped and some parts differed quite a bit. But I think the story would have been a lot better if I had a better sense of where it was going.