Reviewed by leelu92 on
Too much inner monologue. Too much, "you're so beautiful, you're so sexy". The story itself was solid- the first 1/4 of the book was solid and then it just went off into the wild blue yonder. Run on sentences and grammar mistakes here and there. Too long winded for me, I felt like it could've been edited down by a 1/4 and be tighter all together. Cliffhanger for sure. Of course, I want to know what happens but I'm going to have to think long and hard about reading it. I'm sure there are plenty of people that will love this book- it's not a bad book by any means but it frustrated the heck out of me.
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- Started reading
- 24 March, 2013: Finished reading
- 24 March, 2013: Reviewed