Reviewed by layawaydragon on

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Made it through the Prologue and Deliliah's Part One for a total of 82 pages before quitting. Not one but TWO random-ass 'thrilling' scenes and then starts switching to thREE different POVs in Part Two that doesn't immediately connect to anything that happened in the first two scenes. You can't do two cold opens

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