The Diabolic by S J Kincaid

The Diabolic (Diabolic, #1)

by S.J. Kincaid

'Epic and electrifying' Maximum Pop

A Diabolic is ruthless. A Diabolic is powerful. A Diabolic has a single task: Kill in order to protect the person you've been created for.

Nemesis is a Diabolic, a humanoid teenager created to protect a galactic senator's daughter, Sidonia. The two have grown up side by side, but are in no way sisters. Nemesis is expected to give her life for Sidonia, and she would do so gladly. She would also take as many lives as necessary to keep Sidonia safe.
When the power-mad Emperor learns Sidonia's father is participating in a rebellion, he summons Sidonia to the Galactic court. She is to serve as a hostage. Now, there is only one way for Nemesis to protect Sidonia. She must become her. Nemesis travels to the court disguised as Sidonia - a killing machine masquerading in a world of corrupt politicians and two-faced senators' children. It's a nest of vipers with threats on every side, but Nemesis must keep her true abilities a secret or risk everything.
As the Empire begins to fracture and rebellion looms closer, Nemesis learns there is something more to her than just deadly force. She finds a humanity inside her that is true and pure - more so than that of most humans she encounters. Amidst all the danger, action and intrigue, her humanity just might be the thing that saves her life - and the empire.
 

Reviewed by Amber (The Literary Phoenix) on

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I love books with all this political intrigue. I never know who’s being honest and who is plotting and I still think there may be more plotting and honestly I’m just quite pleased about all things. The Diabolic was a delightful read and really, the only thing I’m upset about is that I didn’t read it sooner.

Okay, so, this is a dystopia. I know most people are sick of dystopias, but this is one of the good ones. The stakes are high, the world is well-built, and the characters are interesting and unpredictable. When many books decided to emulate The Hunger Games, so many of them mimicked the love triangle (often over-exaggerating it) while failing to build a truly fascinating world. I love the setting in The Diabolic. S.J. Kincaid has created a world with politics and religion woven carefully together in such ways as emulate history. Her creation is not so extreme that it’s unbelievable, but not so simple as to be unoriginal. As a science fiction novel, The Diabolic embraces a space setting, but also dabbles in genetic engineering. Yes, there are nods to The Hunger Games (the beauty bots come for mind) but it is it’s own thing, and I enjoyed the immersion.

The plot itself is twisty. A lot of the twists are predictable, but this is one of those stories that there are so many lies and betrayals that you start to second guess your own theories. Like, “So-and-so is probably lying, BUT MAYBE THAT’S JUST WHAT SHE WANTS ME TO THINK.” I love those types of books, so this is such a great fit for me, plot-wise. I see some similarities (like I mentioned) to The Hunger Games and I also feel like there is a similar feel to Red Queen. There’s a clearly defined social class structure and there are royals and rebellions. All a great deal of fun to read.

The characters were less rounded than I like, but I think this is largely because the POV is emotionally flat on purpose… at least in the beginning. As Nemesis evolves, Kincaid brilliantly transitions into more complicated character-building. So I can’t judge the characters too harshly. For example, I believe if Sidonia had been introduced later in the book, she would have felt like a more intricate character because our first impression of her would have been different according to how Nemesis had grown in that time. In fact, I even appreciated the love triangle here because even though I thought it was a weak plot point, the uniqueness in it was interesting and refreshing. And I never thought I’d use “love triangle” and “unique” in the same sentence.

All in all, I liked the writing and I liked the story and I’m definitely here for books two and three. If you’re a fan of dystopias and are looking for a properly decent one, I wouldn’t hesitate to recommend The Diabolic. The only thing I would ask any reader be aware of is that there are some violent moments in this book. I didn’t find them particularly gory, but they could be alarming.

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