This story was okay. Some people listed it as BDSM, and I would disagree. The men were commanding, but other than a little spanks, tying up and some hair pulling, there is no BDSM in this story. It is a little hard to read, as the "head-hopping" is a little erratic. It was hard to know which character's head you were reading from. I think it even changed in the middle of a paragraph a couple of time. The sex scenes are pretty intense and there is no M/M at all. The two men are completely straight and never touch each other sexually.
