Reviewed by Ashley on
Also I had some issues with the world building. Clearly a lot of thought went into everything, but I don't feel like it was conveyed very well. I had a hard time grasping it and really understanding what the world was all about. It's very unique but it felt like information was just thrown at me rather than neatly woven into the story. I saw it, but didn't really understand it, maybe.
There's also a pretty serious case of insta-love. I thought I was liking the romance, but then at the end the "I love you" bomb dropped. They barely even knew each other yet! Especially because the Wil hadn't told Loom a single thing about herself.
Reading updates
- 16 May, 2017: Started reading
- 21 May, 2017: Finished reading
- 22 May, 2017: Reviewed