Maybe it's because of the editing error right at the beginning that made me into a serious grumpy-pants but I just didn't like this sequel as much as the original novella. Also, had there been *gasp!* less sex, there may have been more room for plot. There were some moments that saved it from a total disaster (like what, exactly, is going on with Mark?) and then... it was over...with a cliffhanger no less! *grr*
