Reviewed by ladygrey on
It's the sort of book that isn't bad, really, but I just found too annoying to really enjoy.
Part of the annoyance was that I kept wanting to take a red pen to it here and there. She has the exact same sentence four lines apart. And the book keeps reaching these sort of climax moments but then just keeps going on. But, I think mostly, that it was just a whole lot of telling which bothered me more as the story progressed. Maybe because it was a cute story with cute characters and so I wanted more from it. And also because she was telling me things about the characters that didn't make sense.
Like the Monday morning Bella wakes up completely shaken by the sermon she'd heard on Sunday and spends the entire chapter mulling over it when it didn't connect at all to anything she'd been dealing with thus far in the book. It was like this whole new conflict that rose up out of no where, pierced Bella to the core and then disappeared by the end of the chapter. Or the boot debacle. That was just annoying in so many different ways. And the way Bella is so fatalistic - every time anything goes wrong she's convinced no one will ever want to speak to her again. ugh.
To be fair, there were other things that didn't seem to make sense that [a:Janice Thompson|118456|Janice Thompson|http://d202m5krfqbpi5.cloudfront.net/authors/1361561353p2/118456.jpg] then gave history and context to explain which I appreciated. But it was still a lot of telling and not a narrative the drew me into the story and the characters.
And they were fun characters. Guido at the rehearsal made me laugh and there were other funny moments. I think my review would be much more positive if I had read it with my book club because then I would have vented out loud and not felt the need to write things down so I'd remember what I thought of the book.
Reading updates
- Started reading
- 27 July, 2013: Finished reading
- 27 July, 2013: Reviewed