Reviewed by Kait ✨ on
I was very conscious it was a story and I wasn’t immersed—it made me think a lot about third person though and also how to write an effective and believable romantic relationship. Not that Durst did it wrong, just there were some holes in it I think and I wasn’t fully invested.
Ultimately I guess that’s my criticism—I never felt invested in this story. Because objectively, there were things I loved about it. I really liked how Durst represented the different kinds of relationships girls can have in their school years, especially with the not-so-nice top-of-the-class girl. I LOVE training montages so that part of the book really appealed to me. I loved the concept of a “tree people” and how that would play out logistically. I thought Daleina’s emotional arc was really well considered. Daleina’s struggle of leaving home and then coming back to it and not belonging is one that I think many people will relate to. The political aspects of the plot were interesting and I’m super curious to see what will happen in [b:The Reluctant Queen|32600602|The Reluctant Queen (The Queens of Renthia, #2)|Sarah Beth Durst|https://images.gr-assets.com/books/1481737807s/32600602.jpg|44737355].
All that being said, I just did NOT connect. I think it was something about the way she wrote in third person. I’d like to go back and dig into the whys and hows of that a little more, but I just can’t put my finger on it for now.
Reading updates
- Started reading
- 26 December, 2016: Finished reading
- 26 December, 2016: Reviewed