Jane
Written on Aug 12, 2017
It just doesn't make any sense. There's no explaining it/why she now wants to be in his film, because for the duration of the text, she's obsessed with pleasing this dude...which brings up another issue:
Can we please stop having girls partake in lesbian sexcapades for the male gaze? And can we also stop writing them so shitty? All the sex was was about what the guy wanted; it was ridiculous. There was nothing about what the women would want -- it was a threesome, by the way, and he didn't even change condoms between each woman.
The wiring was mediocre, more telling than showing.
It reads much better if you pretend the singer is a masculine woman.