stressedrach
Written on Mar 17, 2012
It was just 18 pages long so it was a very short story and to be honest at the beginning of the book I did get lost a few times as the story went from one thing to the next very quickly.
As it was a short story the erotic nature of the book started within the first few pages.
The storyline was rather choppy and I really think if there had been more details, it had been longer and more depth it would have made a better read.