Cocktails and Books
Maren is seventeen so some of the high-schoolishness I expected (her dislike of warrior Gavin turned crush turned love). But the storyline jumped around too. It would have been better to slowly build this world, the characters and some of the backstory to give us a better foothold as readers moved into the next book (I'm guessing there's going to be a next book based on how this one ended).
Gavin, I think, was supposed to be this broody, sexy warrior who was trying to fight off his attraction to young Maren. Instead, he came off like Maren, flip-flopping with his feelings. The confessions of love just didn't feel sincere.