Angie
Written on Dec 31, 2018
+F/F Holiday Romance!
+Age gap! Hannah is 11 years older than Allison.
+Allison is very straightforward about her attraction to Hannah.
+Fun and heartwarming interactions between Hannah and her sisters.
No!
-Lots of typos!
-Random sentences in third person, even though it's told in first.
-Awkward, stilted dialogue.
-Really weird run on sentences, fragments, and whatever this is:
"I feel her tongue on my neck and I'm melting into her and in a voice tight with need and desire."