jamiereadthis
Written on Jan 22, 2020
The one writing tic I hate the most:
Sentences.
Broken up into fragments.
On different lines.
Because… why?
I’d almost like to re-read the story written in a different style to see if it helped. I say almost because it might still be full of over the top emotional melodrama. Making the story smaller would improve it by an order of magnitude.
