Lianne
Written on Jun 13, 2014
The story was pretty straightforward: Evangeline does not wish to marry the Duke of Manchester, wishing instead to fall in love and marry the man who appears quite frequently in her dreams. Meanwhile her sister Angela is in love with the duke but cannot say anything about it, following instead the proper protocols and expectations that her mother and society dictates.
I think the story would have benefited if it had been longer: the resolution of the story happened much too quickly and some aspects of the story could’ve been fleshed out further, such as Angela’s love for the duke and how long and how deep that interest in him has been, as well as proper explanation behind their mother’s motivations. There was also one element of this story that I did not expect (and was taken quite literally), which that sort of took me out of the experience of the novella.
In Her Dreams was interesting enough, kept me invested to see how everything was going to turn out for Evangeline and Angela. The dialogue was a little clunky at the start, but it evened out over the course of the story.
Actual rating: 2.5/5