brokentune
Baaah. This turned into an incredibly cliched and boring story at around the 20% mark.
Even tho the story picks up pace a little after we get to the father's journal, it is still an incredibly annoying and boring story with none of the characters being really interesting.
Is this meant to be YA?
That's what it reads like to me, and that really is not a good thing.
Anyway, on to something more engaging.