ladygrey
Written on Feb 23, 2013
I liked that her writing style was a little unorthodox but created compelling caveats in the story that sort of flashed back or condensed dialog. And I liked her descriptions. There were lines I liked the way she wrote them and things she found a way to say that I really enjoyed. Just from a literary stand point it was interesting.
Except for the 70 page monologue. I trudged through that and did not enjoy it.
Because the book is sort of a colossal display of her worldview and social/economic philosophy. And she had demonstrated that very clearly through the characters and the plot and the dialog and that worked well. I didn't need 70 pages of her actually spelling the whole thing out and examining how untenable the opposing viewpoint was. The thing they always tell writers is show, don't tell. She'd already shown her theme perfectly well, it really bothered me that she then proceeded to tell it all to me all over again.
Other than that monologue - I was surprised that she actually managed to keep me engaged and interested for a such a long book. And she was able to weave bits of mystery into it but then explain everything that happened to every character that I needed to know how they ended up. I liked that I ended up understanding everything and that it was well written along the way.