layawaydragon
Written on Oct 3, 2016
-Extremely rough start. Stilted and forced. For example, her friends should have known about Princeton before this. It's an obvious, sloppy way to inform the reader.
-Hannah made some terribly dumb decisions.
-Became overtly religious with a preachy-message.
-Why didn't Hannah ask her mother how she knew the guy?
-Instalove
-Slut-shaming.
-The showdown was going well, until Hannah did some more dumb shit. *screeching halt*
-The ending wasn't *so* bad.
Again, I'm impressed I finished this one at all. I suppose if you want alternative boy love interest, it'll be okay to recommend but I wouldn't.