mitabird
Written on Dec 27, 2009
Desy is an OK character, though her stubbornness and independence seemed to get her into trouble. She's sarcastic and it came through well as I had a few laugh out loud moments. I really liked Armand; he was very suave and intense and seemed to really love Desy.
The downside to this story was how boring it was. Nothing happened the first 3/4 of the story. I'm sad to say that there was way too much sex and I ended up skimming/skipping almost all of them; they were very repetitious. The revelation of Nick's feelings seemed forced and I think was used to create drama and tension. It didn't work, IMO. It just seemed an unnecessary plot device. The ending was alright, I guess. I wavered between a 2.5 and 3 rating, but settled with 2.5 stars.