Liz (Bent Bookworm)
Written on Nov 1, 2018
Disclaimer: this was my first ever m/m romance read. I'm not a romance devotee, by any means, so perhaps it should not have been a surprise that I found aspects of this novel grating.
2.5/5 stars. Rounded to 3 because it redeemed itself slightly with a sweet ending.
Characters
I liked both the MCs, Quintus and Kaeso, from the start. For different reasons, as their personalities and backgrounds are QUITE different (backgrounds more so than the personalities). However, I felt there were a lot of inconsistencies portrayed in their characters as the novels progressed. For instance, Quintus is a hardened gladiator and a skilled tactician, and at one point he makes a COMPLETE NOOB BLUNDER. Um, no? Sorry, but a man like Quintus would NEVER fail to think of the people he is close to being used as blackmail or bargaining chips. Never. Kaeso was even worse. At the beginning he is proud and fierce and defiant. He changes and falls in love with Quintus so rapidly I found it entirely unbelievable. It reeks of Stockholm syndrome, to me. As the story progresses, it is clear that it is NOT, however, the speed at which Kaeso's attachment forms is not consistent with the horrible experiences he is supposed to have had (which we never get much description of, only hints and at the end, a few more details).
All that said, Quintus is sexy AF and their relationship is sweet and gave me warm fuzzies AT THE END.
Description
I'm pretty sure this novel was not written with the best view to historical accuracy. It's not supposed to be literary fiction, so that's okay, but I found the dialogue especially to be stilted and off-putting. More so in the middle than in the beginning and end. There also wasn't ENOUGH detail for my tastes...I was vaguely aware that the city was Roman, but it didn't really give me that walk-back-in-time feel. I think this is a particularly hard time period in which to do that, due to how very far back in time it is and the fact that there are less historical records/description of it than say, Victorian times.
Plot
Predictable. Saw everything coming a full mile away. Again, not entirely unexpected because the main focus here was the romance. However, even with that...it was as if the author was purposely alternating: scene with other characters, sex scene, scene with other characters, sex scene...and on and on. Even the sex scenes became extremely similar (which...I guess is also expected?). With about 15% left it actually became a little more interesting as things drew to a close...the only thing really left open was if a certain side character would live or die, and where Quintus and Kaeso would settle down for their HEA.
Flame Rating
Eh, 3.5/5? It's very graphic and they're obviously very very into each other. I was so nonplussed by Kaeso's character flip-flopping though, that I couldn't really get into the sexy scenes. YMMV.
All in all, maybe if you enjoy this genre, you would enjoy this book. I probably won't be reading any other stories by this author, but I do have one more m/m romance I want to try...see if it's me or the genre.
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