nitzan_schwarz
Written on May 1, 2016
It's not bad, but it was just...
-The cheating (sort of) grated on me. Granted, this has plot reasons and I understand it but... meh
-Kind of insta love despite them knowing each other for months? Like, why do you love each other after he's been a douche to you? Is it just because you're soul mates? I need more ground than that to a relationship.
-The carnal lust shit.