WOW, was this book actually written by this author?? This was book was a HOT MESS from start to finish. It read like it was written by a 10 year old. The crappy juvenile dialogue?? Tim was 31? Could have fooled me. Him and Vanessa sounded like a couple of pre-teens with a crush. Don't even get me started on that fact that the Tim and Vanessa spend like maybe 5% of the book in each others company. I LOVE insta-love, but that shit didn't fly in this one. SO disappointed...
