Mystereity Reviews
Written on Dec 3, 2015
If all the cheesy, melodramatic and overwrought romance was taken out of this book, it would've been a great mystery. It's one thing to introduce a little romantic spark, or a bit of sexual tension. It adds a little spice to a book. I get that. It's another thing to beat a reader over the head with pent-up in-your-face hot mess. If this book was a dance move, it would be a pelvic thrust. In your eye. Going on and on and on.
It would've been only 12 pages long, but it would've been a good mystery. So 1 star for plot, -4 stars for everything else.