goodnghtmoonx
Written on Mar 9, 2013
There is a lot of potential for this story, but it didn't make it. For me, the ending almost felt like it was rushed just to get it published and over with. Also, it didn't feel like it was completed, which might be a part of the "getting it done" thing.
Honestly, I feel like Pete came across the document one day, decided to slap an ending onto it and call it a day.