Of Metal and Wishes (Of Metal and Wishes, #1)

by Sarah Fine

This love story for the ages, set in a reimagined industrial Asia, is a little dark, a bit breathless, and completely compelling. A "grisly and satisfying" tale (Publishers Weekly) inspired by The Phantom of the Opera.

Sixteen-year-old Wen assists her father in his medical clinic, housed in a slaughterhouse staffed by the Noor, men hired as cheap factory labor. Wen often hears the whisper of a ghost in the slaughterhouse, a ghost who grants wishes to those who need them most. And after one of the Noor humiliates Wen, the ghost grants an impulsive wish of hers--brutally.

Guilt-ridden, Wen befriends the Noor, including the outspoken leader, a young man named Melik. At the same time, she is lured by the mystery of the ghost. As deadly accidents fuel tensions within the factory, Wen is torn between her growing feelings for Melik, who is enraged at the sadistic factory bosses and the prejudice faced by his people at the hand of Wen's, and her need to appease the ghost, who is determined to protect her against any threat--real or imagined. Will she determine whom to trust before the factory explodes, taking her down with it?

• ISBN10: 1442483601
• ISBN13: 9781442483606
• Publish Date: 5 August 2014
• Publish Status: Active
• Imprint: Margaret K. McElderry Books
• Format: eBook
• Pages: 320
• Language: English

Reviews

[cornerfolds]

It was pure luck that brought Of Metal and Wishes across my path. I saw the second book in the series in a Waiting on Wednesday post recently, saw "Phantom of the Opera retelling," quickly found out it was a series, and searched my local library! I was so excited when I got my hands on this that I started it immediately and I was not at all disappointed.

I have never been a fan of the steampunk genre (is it a genre?) and didn't actually realize this book fit that bill until it was too late to back out. There are metal spiders, metal appendages, metal rooms, metal war machines... there's metal in the title! But it really did work in this book. The setting is so realistically portrayed that it all fit together and I could see it like I was there. The mood was dreary and I felt like everything was shrouded in dust (or metal shavings) and it was amazing.

The characters were one area I wasn't totally sure about at first. The society this book is set in is one in which women are extremely suppressed, have no rights, and are viewed as property. While this was really, REALLY hard for me to stomach, I did come to terms that this was just the way the world was and did not reflect the heroine, Wen (Christine), who is remarkably strong against such terrible odds. Although she is deeply respectful of her father, she also finds ways to be strong in her own way.

And of course a Phantom of the Opera retelling would not be complete without a love triangle! In fact, I think Phantom of the Opera was THE original love triangle (okay, maybe not, but I'm saying that) and that is why it works here. I will admit I felt incredibly confusing emotions over this. I have always been a Phantom fan but this book had me feeling things for Melik (Raoul) that I had to come to terms with. This book has made me a Raoul, er... Melik fan. I think this is because this is the first time I've ever seen the Raoul character written as multi-dimensional. The Ghost (Phantom) of this story is so easy to sympathize with, but I also understand the fear and uncertainty that Wen was feeling throughout the book. This whole situation is just a very uncomfortable one.

My one, very minor complaint is that the writing seemed a little strange. It almost seemed like it was written in a different language and then translated to English. Then again, maybe this was done purposely to add to the overall feel of the story.

This is a fantastic retelling that totally blew me away! It made me want to watch the movie so bad (incidentally, I did) and I was picturing scenes in the film as I read along with this new retelling of the story. It wraps up nicely at the end very similarly to how the movie (and original book) left off so it could really be read as a standalone in my opinion, although I'm very excited about book two! I highly recommend this to retelling and Phantom fans!

[jnikkir]

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I've been reading a lot of retellings lately, and to be honest, the last few have been less than stellar. So I was kind of wary upon starting this book. Of Metal and Wishes is a retelling of The Phantom of the Opera - which I've never read, but I adore the musical. A YA retelling of this story sounded awesome - like it could be dark and gritty and romantic and fraught with feels. And Of Metal and Wishes totally delivered.

Of Metal and Wishes is the kind of book that you just experience. This book is beautiful - the writing pulled me in so easily to the dark setting, got me immediately invested in the characters, and effortlessly pulled me along with the plot and these characters' struggles.

Wen, the main character, has just started working as the doctor's (her father's) assistant in a slaughterhouse, in a "reimagined industrialized Asia". For the most part, Wen is extremely reserved in her mannerisms, but she's also incredibly strong - she has to be in order to be her father's assistant and help with the many accidents that occur in the slaughterhouse. And not only is she strong in that way, but as the environment in the slaughterhouse changes, she becomes determined to stand up against the injustices and inequality she witnesses.

(Quick note of warning for the terribly squeamish: Yes, this book takes place in a slaughterhouse, and its main character is the doctor's assistant. We are not spared any of the gory details.)

The plot in Of Metal and Wishes is driven by the appearance of Noor workers at the slaughterhouse - who are hired as a source of cheap labor, and who become a source of intense animosity between the native Itanyai and the Noor themselves. The Itanyai view the Noor as a coarse and barbaric people, and are extremely and immediately prejudiced against them from the moment they arrive to work.

There's an undercurrent of intense unease that runs through Of Metal and Wishes, fueled by this prejudice, by the growing discontent of the Noor and the way they are treated, and also by another source: The workers believe that a ghost haunts the deserted basement corridors and shadowy corners of the slaughterhouse. Though he's only been there for seven years, a custom has formed with the workers and bosses, to leave the Ghost small gifts and to write prayers to him, asking for favors. In granting them, he has built up a solid reputation, and he seems to be getting more and more involved in the events there. Especially once the skeptical Wen shows up and, after being humiliated by one of the Noor, dares the Ghost to prove his existence.

The Ghost is definitely one of the most fascinating characters in Of Metal and Wishes. I don't want to give too much away about him, because spoilers, but I really loved how he was portrayed, and the reasons for his fascination with Wen.

Melik, a young Noor who's nevertheless looked to as a leader among them, was also a fantastic character. He's a strong, compassionate person, and I never once questioned why he and Wen would be drawn to one another.

As this is a Phantom retelling, I wasn't surprised by the slight shadow of a love-triangle that happened, with the Ghost and Melik both falling for Wen for different reasons -- but thankfully, there was no real triangle from Wen's perspective. She and Melik are an entrancing couple to watch, and their relationship is one that, according to the Itanyai, absolutely should not exist. At first, their prejudices form a huge divide between them, but they fascinate one another, and their relationship helps them both view the disparity between their peoples in a whole new light. One thing I was really pleased with, was the fact that the chasm between them felt real, and not just like an obstacle thrown in to add an aspect of "forbidden romance" to the relationship. These characters fit together, but there are real struggles happening as they realize their feelings for one another.

 
In conclusion...

THANK GOODNESS FOR SARAH FINE. I was beginning to despair that I wouldn't find a great retelling anytime soon, but boy, she proved me wrong with Of Metal and Wishes. This book has everything I love about retellings - the same basic structure that's not too different from the original, changes that make the story feel fresh and new, and enough twists and amazing surprises to keep you on your toes the whole way through.

The characters, writing, and story were all completely engrossing, and I can say with near certainty that if you're a fan of Phantom of the Opera (not just the pretty music), you will also really enjoy this book.

I absolutely cannot wait for the sequel and the conclusion to this story, because after that ending... I mean, the ending is good, and it can stand alone, but man. I absolutely want to know what happens next, and I'm so glad we'll get to find out!!

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