jamiereadthis
Written on Jan 7, 2020
David’s limited POV works so well in the first three because you have to fill in some gaps; here, it’s all spelled out explicitly, and often repeatedly, which left me wanting. Given more space to develop, and a more focused POV, this could reach the bar set by David and Balfour. Less cheese and more meat, I guess I’m saying, to be cheeky myself… if that even makes sense.