Djilan
Written on Jan 4, 2019
I think the story has potential and could have been more. I know it's a short story so there isn't enough 'time' to really bring the main characters alive, but now I just had to many questionsmarks about both their behaviour.
And that would have still made me give it 3*.
But the tekst contains too many mistakes. Wrong words, missing punctuations, strange sentences. A few is not a problem, now it was annoying.