thebookdisciple
Written on Jul 11, 2019
Overall the story was good. Alpha male, insta-love, kidnapping, danger. There were a few things that kept me from loving it. #1: overuse of the term "cunt hair". As in "...we were a cunt hair away..." This wasn't just used once. I think it was at least 3 times. It just was gross. Also, in the beginning, there were LOTS of characters and a LOT going on and a LOT of military talk. My eyes kind of glazed over.
I liked both Olivia and Leo though and the story had a good plot!