Unbound (Amoveo Legend, #5.5)

by Sara Humphreys

• ASIN: B00NQEUEP8
• Publish Date: 2015
• Publish Status: Unknown
• Format: eBook (Kindle)
• Pages: 146
• Language: English

Reviews

[Stephanie]

This review was originally posted on Once Upon a Chapter



If I'm being honest, my only real interest in reading Unbound by Sara Humphreys was so that I could warp up a series. Don't get me wrong, I have really enjoyed the Amoveo Legend series. Novellas have just never done much for me. I've never really read a stand alone novella but I think that I have to have a good deal of information before going into the novella. Novellas are so short that time can't be wasted with extensive world building.

I will say that Humphreys is able to load quite a bit of conflict into Zachary and Annabelle's story. If ever there were two people who shouldn't be together it's these two. Both of them end up in Mexico trying to get away from their own problems. Zachary has accepted that he won't find his mate and Annabelle is trying to outrun her hate filled Cato relatives. All of these problems collide in Mexico.

For the minimal amount of money I paid, I am satisfied with Unbound. It kept me entertained, I was able to spend more time among the Amoveo, and wrapped up a series. I will continue to read Humphreys's work as I have certainly enjoyed the world she's created in the series.

[EBookObsessed]

This short novella was quite enjoyable and gives us some tropical seduction with Zachery and Annabelle. Enjoyable thought it is, it also focuses on the one major flaw of the series.

Zachary is an Amoveo shifter of the Lion Clan and he will soon be reaching his 30th birthday and unless he finds his fated mate, he will lose his ability to shift and all his other Amoveo powers. As a Guardian of their Prince, he will be of little help if he is no stronger than a human male and can’t shift.

Zachary has dream walked about his mate, but she always walks away from him and he hasn’t seen her face. He has never heard of an Amoveo whose mate had turned away from him in the dream world.

After being injured in a recent attack on the ranch by the Caedo, a human cult who know about the Amoveo and want to see them extinct, Zach goes to Mexico to vacation and recover. This recent attack has increased Zachary’s hate for the Caedo cult and he is as interested in wiping them off the face of the earth as they wish to do to the Amoveo.

Once there, he comes across a woman who was just attacked on the street. All her belongings were stolen and she received a head injury when she was knocked down. [Note: When you are on the run, particularly in a poor, foreign country, and strolling alone at night in a bad neighborhood, you shouldn’t have all your money in your bag. Keep some in a pocket, some in your shoe, maybe a $20 stuffed in your bra; you know, just in case.]

Annabelle is on the run from her family. After her mother died, her father didn’t know what to do with himself and went back home to his family. It didn’t take long for Annabelle to see that her family was more of a psychotic cult and they were expecting her to drink the Kool-Aid and follow their dogma. They wanted to kill people. People they didn’t even consider to be people. They considered these Amoveo to be animals that needed to be destroyed. Annabelle was not about to agree to this, so at the first opportunity she grabbed what little she had and hopped the first flight out of the country, hoping they had better things to do than come looking for her.

The only problem is that the Caedo know that Annabelle has been having dreams about a lion and what that means. They are not going to let her get away. In fact, they are going to wait for her to lead them straight to the Amoveo.

THOUGHTS:
The major flaw of this series is the fact that Amoveo who don’t mate, lose their powers, and any Amoveo who mate with full humans lose their powers. These are different than the half-human/half-Amoveo mates which have been the heroines in most of this series. No one loses their abilities if they mate a half-Amoveo which does seem a bit hypocritical.

So in the end, Zachary gets to make a choice between mating with Annabelle and losing his powers or staying away from Annabelle and losing his powers. So it is not truly a choice or self-sacrifice for him to choose Annabelle. He’s going to lose is ability to shift, etc. whether or not he mates with her, so he might as well mate with her and get a beautiful companion/lover to live his soon to be human life with. I just think it would have had more impact if his decision to love her made him choose her over his abilities. Or, in this case, that the choice he makes was to accept the human mate who was born to his mortal enemy, the Caedo, that being the only way to keep his abilities, and his choice is whether he can look past his prejudice and love her and mate with her anyway, or would he rather walk away from her and lose his abilities.

The way the series is written, he’s going to lose everything he has ever known no matter what he chooses so why not keep the beautiful woman who he has incredible sex with? It was not much of a sacrifice to make the choice. Since Annabelle was mostly on his side from the beginning, it wasn’t even as if he had to really convince her that being a Caedo was wrong. She wasn’t part of their cult to begin with.

Aside from my complaint about self-sacrifice and that fact that Zachary didn’t make one, this short story was full of exciting fights and chases, and a hot sex scene in a tropical paradise, which is something we all dream about when we want to go on a tropical vacation. It was certainly worth the $.99 price tag.