I enjoyed the concept of this a lot and I do wish that the story had been longer and more fleshed out. The plot has a ton of potential but like most short stories of this nature they tend to focus more on the physical desires of the main character...which ends up making other parts of the story fall short. Also I don't really like the rush to have sex, if you put all the good stuff in the first scene it makes the other scenes rather repetitive. Typical main characters really, you have the overly alpha male and the 'Don't push me around' softy of a woman. Anyway it's good enough that I want to know what happens in the next one.
