Mystereity Reviews
Written on Jul 14, 2014
That being said, the writing was pretty bad. Cleaned up and edited, this would be even more enjoyable. The plot was interesting, although the last half of the book was way too rushed. The characters were easy to relate to, although more like sisters than mother and daughter (who the hell asks to accompany their daughter on a date? Ugh.) There were a lot of plot holes, dialogue frequently did not make sense and some things were over-explained and some things were not explained enough.
Overall, yeah, it sounds like there's a lot of detractions, but it also shows a lot of promise.