shannonmiz
Written on Oct 9, 2015
Well, this is a hard review to write. There are things wrong with this book, things that I feel may irritate the average reader, things that irritated me. But then... I also really liked it. Hence the confusion.
So, what appealed to me? Good question!
- The story was just really captivating. The idea of being stuck in time was so cool. And Lola never felt like she belonged, so when she found a place (time?) that suited her, it was really fun to watch her blossom. And I loved the idea that she never knew when she could be snatched back to the present.
- The characters were really great. Especially the ones in the past, because holy crap, I adore Lola's past friends and love interest. Even the people in the present seemed to have appropriate reactions to things (vagueness for reasons) and it fit well into the storyline.
- The second half of the book was basically unputdownable, but the last 15% was just fabulous. I loved how exciting the ending was, but how I also felt a sense that the story had been tied up and I wasn't left hanging.
- Honestly, it was just plain enjoyable. It was a fun story, and I was entertained. And sometimes, that is just good enough!
The problems:
- The beginning was kind of... confusing. It was a little rushed and disconnected, and I felt like the information I was getting was a bit of an info-dump via some behind the scenes conversations. It was like the book needed to get its groove, and luckily it did, though it took some time.
- This kind of goes hand in hand with the above point, but I would have liked more world building. I suppose that since Lola had no idea what was happening, it made sense that we didn't either, but there were some details that I would have liked explained a bit more, especially when it came to the semantics of the travel itself. At times I just found myself asking "but... how?" and getting no explanation. I like explanations.
- There is a pretty strong case of insta-love. In hindsight, I suppose there are reasons. But in the moment, I was rolling my eyes. I did like Peter though, so that was good. And it's easy to see why someone like Lola who has never felt loved would cling to someone so quickly. I guess I understood it from her end more than his.
Bottom Line: This story just made me happy. It was exciting, and heartwarming, and sweet. Yes, it was flawed, but that didn't stop me from enjoying this fun, fast read.
*Copy provided by publisher for review