phyllish
Written on Dec 26, 2014
The introduction of a new conflict near the end of the book was strange. It somehow seemed to be just thrown in, and the resolution of the conflict was a little too cheesy even for a Christmas story.
I also felt that the heroine could have been developed better. It seemed like she was either crying or drooling over Nick through the entire book.
There were some other things that just didn't fit quite right in the story, but I honestly can't think of what they were at the moment.